Tuesday, March 11, 2008

REVISION-mystery character

This young, free-bird star isn’t saying “that’s hot” anymore. Tall and statures, this blonde loves to party and have a good time, but isn’t having any luck finding friends. She thinks that her talents include singing, acting and dancing but it seems as if the whole world thinks otherwise. Who said being rich and beautiful was easy. (57 words)

2 comments:

brodic said...

Paris Hilton

camccune said...

I'd like to see a few more details. A little too much "telling" (the part about her show, friends), instead of showing.

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