The headline "Men's and Women's Day Spa" should be changed to "Day Spa for Men and Women."
In the second line veteran is mispelled "vateran". 
At the bottom in the read it reads, "We do not accept customer..." It should read, "We do not accept any customers...."
The pm has an AP style error and should be spelled p.m.
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The first one should be "Men and Women's Day Spa," although your rewrite is also an improvement. (+2)
Good job on the rest.
2+4+4+4=14 pts.
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